Mouthwash via Paul J. Bearsworth

by Adam

That last post was embarrassing, so I had to put something else up before I went to bed for the night.  Here is an abandoned start for a comic re-telling of Goldilocks I was working on for an iFanboy contest.  I actually like the idea, a noir-ish look at a broken Papa bear after the mysterious menace known as Goldilocks destroyed his life.  There were a lot of fun ideas in that world, an animal farm like place where anthropomorphic animals ran society.  The monkeys were the rich upper class, having invented and sold mechanical thumbs that allow the rest of the animal kingdom to use other tools they sell.  Old ways and culture falling by the wayside in the face of rapid technology and commerce growth as a result.  Paul J. Bearsworth sucked into a web of deception and heartbreak as he tries to hunt down a mysterious, possible human menace, known as Goldilocks.

The layouts I had were just for a short little story, and were fairly solid.  I just lacked the follow through.  I’m working on it Internet.  I’m working on it.